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CMFiL first page I put a warning on it because later on the story it will be containing worse material than what is in this page. Read at your own risk.
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Holy Demons are my own origonal species if you wish to know more about them I will have other stories up about them to read and possibly a information page once I refine the information I already have. Critique is welcome!
NEXT PAGE: Can Monsters Fall in Love pg2
All characters and story credit to
Holy Demons are my own origonal species if you wish to know more about them I will have other stories up about them to read and possibly a information page once I refine the information I already have. Critique is welcome!
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I like this character's back story. It shows some of their personality. I see potential and that potential will lead you to great things.
The only critique I have is there's some grammar issues, but I'm not a grammarian, so I'll end it there.
The only two tools you really need to help out with anything is writing and reading.
The only critique I have is there's some grammar issues, but I'm not a grammarian, so I'll end it there.
The only two tools you really need to help out with anything is writing and reading.